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This is good. Cartoonish, which I love because all I do is draw cartoons. haha If I were to make some nit-picks, I would just point out that her head ...

Hi there! I don't know if there's any chapters before this, so I'll just comment on the content of this one. So do you notice how every sentence in the ...

Hey there! I haven't read the other chapters, but I'll just comment on the content of this one! One guy in the Fire section looked right at me and winked. ...

Hey there! I'm not a fan of the Twilight series, but I really liked this. It took the vampire vibe to an entirely new, entirely not-lame level. I think the ...

Hey there! My blue star review! haha So parts of this just felt like I was reading a summary about Greek mythology. It just sounded like facts being stated in ...

Wow, AAAM, wow. That was... really good. Your writing improved a lot towards the end. Your sentences started to mean something, instead of just explain things. There are so many ...

Done! :D

Hai there! Here as requested! So I don't have much to say about this. It was very entertaining, and though you used many, many cliche's in here, it was still ...

I like the new Literary Works deal. It sounds fun!

All done. :)

Hai there! Here as requested. So, what I really like about this is the dialogue. It's so realistic, and really puts me in the moment. You write it so that ...

I nominate Elinor for being a great contributer to YWS! Rosey Unicorn for being nice and generally wanting to help people. AAAM for reviewing my stories and letting me review ...

Done. :)

Hai there! Here as requested. First off, grammar is a big thing with me. I'm not going to sit and point out everything that was wrong in this, because there ...

Hai AAAM! This is the end...? Seriously? I see no ending here. You leave me with so many questions, and there really isn't a conclusion, a resolution, or a climax! ...