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Re: The Thief and the Tunnel
Hi there! Haha, I love it. Such a twist of irony, and there is a definite moral to this story. Good work! I think you can do a bit of ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
Yes I am. And If people read this and want to give me feed back on what they think about the idea please do. Basically the MC is a cop ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Robotic Heart
Hi there! Wow wow wooow. This is a very good piece, and from what I read from this you are a very good writer! Quotes 'N' Comments Some said that ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
In a different universe, things are falling apart. A dying planet creates an army of 26 'immortal,' miniature beings controlled by machines and sends them off to 26 neighboring planets. ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: The Return
Hi there! Aw, this is so cute. I really, really like it. However, like every story on here, there are some things that I think can be altered so the ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Dog waser in S.A running away from bear
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Ahaha this story is so cute. It's one of those stories that you tell as a joke with your friends, trying to make up something ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Prey for Pleasure
Hi there! This is really good, and really, really entertaining. I think you told the story well, as if you were an grandparent telling their grandchild the story of ancient ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Pirate Gold
Hi there! This is really cute. You definitely tried to capture the prompt well, however I think you could exaggerate a bit more, but we'll get into that later. I ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Smile
Hi there! Aww this is so sad. :( And I only say that because my sister is the youngest kid in the family and I love her more than anything. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Camp [pt. 1]
HI EL OMG. So, this was good. And definitely interesting. In fact, I didn't want to stop reading, until the end. The killing part... happened so quickly, I don't know. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Legend of the Sands
Hey there! This is really cool. I think it's very important for writers to write things like this, even if it's not included in the novel, or overall story. You ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Like Sisters
Hi El! So, I hate to say it El, because I love your writing, you're seriously very good, but this is boring. I think that the main reason why this ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Jungle Warriors
Hi there! xD was my initial reaction. This is so funny, but at the same time I know it has a serious side to it? Anyways, I assume that the ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Classy's Art Dump
She's sassy, she's hot, she's my first Digital art! xD I actually don't think it's that bad. Hello to the digital side of me! girl5.jpg
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Teen Ink Publishing and Contests
Teenink is a pretty popular magazine for young writers, as far as I know. My Creative Writing teacher had a poster of it posted in the room. Anyways, there are ...
Jun 13, 2011
