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Hey there! Goodness, that was a weird ending. I'm a bit surprised that you didn't say anything about her running away, or about Harry. I expected you to kind of ...

Hey again! Yes, you've done it. You have made James seem like a sweet and caring individual, but you can still see that he has a lot of passion for ...

It hit me like a bullet; a bullet that was shot straight into my ear drum, forcing its way in so that the sounds couldn’t echo. I actually had to ...

Hey there! 1. So I'm comparing this drawing to my dog right now (they kind of have the same neck shape) and it seems as though the head is not ...

Hey hey all! Haven't posted in a while, thought I'd show my progress. man&girl1.jpg Love is Where the Booty is My favorite thing about this drawing is the title - ...

Ahh I'm so confused! I'm going to handle this review in parts. Topic Sentence/Paragraph/Second Paragraph Your first sentence is boring. I'm just going to put that out there. I think ...

Hey there! So there was great imagery here. The only thing I feel like I should comment on is your structure. Every other paragraph there was a rhyme. I would ...

Hey there! This poem was alright. It would be better if you kept with the windowsill theme, or at least had a legitimate reason as to why you went of ...

Hey there! So this was interesting. I think that you might have rushed it a bit, but that's ok if that's what you want to do. If you want to ...

Hey there! This has to be one of the saddest things I have read on YWS. My heart sank with your last few sentences. Since this is one big clump ...

Hey there! I thought this was good. It moved a bit fast, but I liked that for the simple fact that it is a short story, and they aren't supposed ...

Hey there again! Sorry this review did not follow the other. The site crashed on me! Anyways... Quotes 'N' Comments “I've had enough. I've so had enough,” she hisses to ...

For my drawings, I now like to sign as B.S., replacing my first name with Belle. I don't know why I did this, I just didn't want it to be ...

Woah! This is crazy good. Since Pink already did the nitpicks, I'm going to give a few opinions on things. I think this is amazing, really. I know there is ...