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Re: Halloween Special Radio Show on October 31st
Fasho.
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Review Day October 2010 Check-In
Three done. Happy review day.
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: A Second Chance
Hey there! This was cute. I actually quite liked it. It was realistic, about how the girl dreams of him saying something romantic when all he says is 'She's too ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Swallowing Lies
Hey there! I've read your 'spoiler' and I still don't get it. I have one opinion about people who say that most people don't get their poem: that they need ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Cold Love
Hey there! This is really good. I've never read a poem on here that goes as far into their words as you do. Usually I feel as though certain words ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Darkmoor Juvenile Prison
Kisa I was taking notes on logarithms when two notes came my way from both sides. I read the one that Viv had passed to me first, because I didn't ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Your dad dyes his hair? That is the most amazing thing I've ever heard.
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Heaven
Oh hey there wifey-poo. Alright, so this was cute. And sad. And as I already told you, it reminded me of when I had pneumonia. But to the review, which ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Haunting Matty (scary story contest)
Hey there! This is for the scary story contest! I don't like the ending much, so any comments on that would be great. This is the tale of Matty, a ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: A Day In The Life Of A Rubber Duck
Wasn't this a breath of fresh air? I like sweet stories like this. It reminded me of a cross between "Toy Story" and "The Doll People". There is one occuring ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Darkmoor Juvenile Prison
Kisa V. I walked over and sat at my seat. Lisa was sitting, staring at the pencil she was twirling between her fingers. I frowned and tapped the desk to ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: The Shapeshifter- Prologue
Hey there! Well I see that the above reviewers have covered most of the grammer, so I'll just talk about content, hmm? As prologue, this seems very promising. Prologue's aren't ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Classy Reviews [open]
Getting to these a little slow, but I will do them all! (:
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: My Bloody Valentine Reviews
Pretty please with a cherry on top?
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Working on Reviewer II, please help me....
If you would do this I would be eternally greatful.
Oct 15, 2010
