captain.classy

Hi there Woah, I'm very impressed with the entries for this recent short story generator contest. A lot of them have been very inventive, and though the topics are silly, ...

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I think we have more than enough people to start. Vussy cat, if you'd like to start us off that'd be great! Just post something and I'll PM you if ...

Hi there! This is a very short chapter. Very short, a bit confusing, and most if it really isn't necessary. Quotes 'N' Comments Some how I felt as though she ...

Hi there! Wow, this is a very promising first chapter. You seem to have the characters pretty much figured out, and as you probably planned, I hate Elizabeth. The grandmother ...

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xD Stray hairs, yah, that's just me being lazy.

ghetto poca.jpg I'm doing a series of drawings called "A Different Kind of Disney Character" where I draw Disney characters in the ways they should have been, based off of ...

captain.classy and Elinor Brynn are running this Storybook. Plot: Adults have put together several 'camps' around the United States. They send their children to these camps to learn manners, how ...

Thoughts?

Hi there! This is a very interesting story. I think that besides the fact that he's talking about science, it isn't very science fictiony, which is what the contest is ...

Hi there! This is really good, and really reminds me of my friend's novel Into the Depths. Anyways, I think you've built a really solid first chapter here. You've introduced ...

Hi there! aha this is so cool. I really like where you went with this. I don't think I could of come up with a story nearly this out there ...

Hey there! You can obviously tell that you spent a lot of time on this. It's absolutely wonderful, and the writing was flawlessly enjoyable. If you keep this up and ...

Hi there! This is a wonderful little story about how the moon and sun came to be. I really don't have any corrections on the plot, so I'm just going ...