captain.classy

I love this. I can relate to it so much its umbelievable. I only have one suggestion, and that is you have small lines, then short lines, and its hard ...

I apologize if it seems rather long! I couldn't get everything in i wanted to in a little piece... “Here they are, Rainer. The Jury has decided they should be ...

Hey! Quick review. So, i really felt like your prologue was a little cliche. I mean, i think i have written something just like this! maybe you can change it ...

Sweet deams~Beyonce!

This was truly adorable! I like the way you write: you confused me in the beginning, but in the end everything played out. Good job! I am so very jealous ...

I loved all three chapters! This story is really freaking me out. You have made it so I am actually scared for George's health. Good job! ~Classy

This is so beautiful! I don't understand how it is unfinished. I like it like this! ~Classy

Tell me what you think. (This is my first poem, hope you like it) :D. Wind whips at my hair, Creating a witch-like pose around my head. This line is ...

Okay, this was really confusing, and a little boring. I like the concept, its really random, and maybe unrealistic (?) but I think if you find a better way to ...

I liked you poem! I don't want to change it or anything, but in my opinion i think it would sound better as "I have been Here before" Just a ...

Aww! I want one! haha I have a max puppet from when I was little, but thats about it. It opens today! Goodness, I'm not able to see it till ...

One critique! When you post something that is your own, don't apologize, even if it is crappy! It is Yours! That means you have to cherish it, right? Don't let ...

Hello! I guess you kind of confused me of why you put these up, they aren't really creative. oh well! The first one was definitely the best looking, although, i ...

They added so much stuff... I'm a little worried it will make the story bad, but I doubt it. Just the trailers already have a migical feel to it.

Goodness gracious! I do not know how you explained that so easily. I can't even think about how I would begging if i wanted to tell the part of your ...