captain.classy

Aww! I absolutely love kingdom hearts! i have to admit, that is what attracted me to this! I didn't think it was confusing at all. Well done! ~Classy

Mkay, well you poem flows nice, but i have to say i lost interest by how many times you repeated the word 'hand.' you repeating the same words sort of ...

thanks to everyone who read and commented. I have finished chapter five, and i hope you like this enough for me to post that far, because that is where the ...

okay, okay. Your story seems interesting, but i suggest some serious work on this chapter. You jump around so much, i don't know where you are going! You need to ...

Ello! I saw no one had commented, and i was like, hey! I have some time. I like the way you wrote this. The way the narrator is speaking is ...

I love this poem! It was all too realistic. ha ha I have to say, though, that I do not like the title very well. I don't think it corresponds ...

What was it about this man that made me want to leave John and run away with him? “Pleased to meet you,” I said, sitting down between my mother and ...

Okay, well you jump around different views, you should work on that. i don't have time to do a full analysis, and i apologise for that. This story is intriguing ...

Hiaya! I'm classy. Your story definitely brought me in. I feel like i am already in love with Andrews character! I hope he is good, ha ha Good job on ...

Thanks! My story is posted: fantasy fiction.

Give me your true and honest opinion! The Runaway “Will you marry me?” There was sincerity in his cool, blue eyes. “I will.” I wrapped my arms around his thick ...

The Runaway And as the beautiful bride walked down the hallway, Leading to her one true love, Tears ran down her perfectly-powdered cheeks. She followed the white carpet, Lined with ...

Whoa, okay I just spend the past few days reading all these, and I don't regret it at all! I mean some parts were confusing, yes, but you explained them ...

Quick review! Okay: "with-out any fuss" Just 'without' please. I think you should put a period at the end of this, too. "I thought it was alriight" you dont need ...

I totaly agree with you. I have folders on my computer full of old junk. When i look through it, i try and figure out different ways to write it. ...