captain.classy

Arcadefire! I love that song so much. My uncle told me how they made that song in 2006 for the movie. I guess the movie was supposed to come out ...

Hmm, how you created a mystery about Aiden makes me want to read, I will give you that. I say just try it! and post it, and I will go ...

goodness! I thought I was on track, but wow, all of you are ahead of me! 5,902... Well, that is good for me, last year I only got around 20,000 ...

I liked this, good job. I have no corrections, ha ha ~Classy

Hiya! Sorry for all the nitpicks! Tired of being pushed down the frigid hallways in a beaten-up weal-chair, tired of being force-fed baby food, tired of having preppy nurses a ...

Hiya again! You did better with this part, as far as your poor grammar goes, haha! This was the only part i found confusing: But deep inside me, I felt ...

you guys make me so happy! ~Classy

Hiya! I think i noticed some errors, so i will try to help ;) Our school’s annual function practice had begun. But I wasn’t participating. Studious children like me do ...

aww, your so sweet ;)

“Be back soon mother,” I cried through the front door as we started into town. Adam trailed behind me as I left my front yard. I headed left down the ...

woo! I loved this! Jake's character is a little unrealistically sweet, but sadly, that's what i want to read about! I loved this version of Sleeping beauty! Bravo ~Classy

I liked this. I felt as though you were really speaking of things you think about, you know? I have to admit, your title drew me in! the date your ...

after much debating with myself, i decided to post! haha, im so self-concious, so dont judge!

This is good, but I suggest some work. I find this a little cliche, and your words and lines have all been used! Maybe you could form more poetic, metaphoric ...

Yes! I loved this. I have never read in this section before, but I am glad I did ;) Your description of his bullet-clad face was beautiful. ha ha, wrong ...