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Ha, I am glad you went back to fix it. Editing only takes a second! ~Classy

Woah! I honestly wrote a story that is so similar to this! Yours is better, though. ha! ~Classy

Ha! I really like this. I am actually scared for the twins! I am wondering about Mr.Mosby, and if he is one of the culprits... I think that is what ...

ha, teague, your picture reminds me of a scene in 'night at the roxburry' where someone sticks a twizzled up anothers nose, then eats it.

Hiya! But as far as I'm concerned, This is the only line I found not to flow. There are too many syllables compared to the other lines. Maybe you could ...

It was a Sunday when I had first realized my true feelings for Adam. I was walking back from town, where I had bought tomatoes for my mother, when he ...

So, I don't know if this will help. I have two: The first one recurred when my father was telling me about my childhood, just a plain topic of discussion. ...

Ha, Mizzle. I am wondering how you got that nickname!

Oof! Can you say proofread?! Here I go... I write for the same reason I breath . If I didn't , I would die . Without words to express myself ...

I would consider making your lines all one equal length. When you make a list, the entire bunch could be made into two equal lines. I just think it would ...

Hiya! I really liked the part when jack told Jane where he was taking her. It gave me tingles! But, I am confused about why Jane would go into the ...

Where the Wild Things Are is such a great book. Book definitely better than the movie, and you should read it! It is just a short picture book, so it ...

I am so happy they won!

Okay, well this is interesting. I think i like where you are going with this, but one cant be too sure. I am excited for the next chapter! ~Classy

I didnt know people would still comment on this, ha ha. thanks everyone! I have found YWS to be so much fun, and so helpful! ~Classy