captain.classy

Boo! Ha, sorry but this made me mad! Every other chapter is so full of description and passion and in this one, you just rushed through. I was really sad ...

I thought this was good. I mean, I've read poems about variables before, but whatever. I really liked how you didn't repeat 'so let the number be x' or mention ...

"Numb"! I've been in love with that song as long as I can remember! Others of my favorites include "What I've Done," "Breaking the Habit," and "In the End." ~Classy

I just saw it! I liked it (and not just because John Cusack is my all-time favorite person ever!) It freaked me out! But, I'm really excited for 2012! It's ...

That...movie...was...so...sad! Anyways, I liked this, thought its not very original. Your fist line is about as cliche as it goes. It's hard to write original poetry because so many things ...

You see the long lines that go all the way to the far right of the page? Well, since some lines are short, you need to split those up. It ...

I didn't think "The sun is beginning to rise as I type was part of the poem. But, I think it a pretty line, and goes well in your poem. ...

At first I was all, "How old are you?" Then, by then end, you had moved me. This was so adorable! I feel like it has actually happened to me, ...

Of course right now you can't tell what has happened to the sister. We know something has happened, though, because how would it be a story without it. I think ...

Goodness, I have 997 songs! Here's a few :) Lady Gaga-boys boys boys, starstruck Motion City Soundtrack- Lgfuad, commit this to memory Phantom Planet- California, So I Fall Again The ...

Can't wait to read your stories! PM (personal message) me if you want any reviews from me! ~Classy

I suggest you expand, since this really didn't have a plot, or really even an ending. yet.

Hiya! And that’s what I told myself. And if Catherine ever did get around to asking, that’s what I would tell her. So this is the only thing that bugged ...

I don't have much to say about this poem. It may just be me, but I absolutely hate short lines like these. I think you should make the lines longer. ...

Hi! I saw no one has welcomed you yet, so here I go! There are some basic rules here that everyone likes to follow: There is a 4:1 ratio on ...