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  • WRFF Archive Re: Classy Reviews [open]

    Done! Thanks for the requests!

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Speed of Light (Ch. 2)

    Hey there! This is very interesting. I hate aliens. And when you said it was an alien story, I almost considered refusing your request. But I'm here, and I read ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love II (Rebellion)

    Hey there! Thanks for the request. This is fairly good. I like the meaning of the poem, but I think you could do a better job at conveying it better. ...

    Jan 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: DELETED!

    Hey there Shubsters! What's with the name change? Anyways, I'm here! So, this was really good. You have one of those natural voices. Your words flow effortlessly, or at least ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Water Ballet

    Hey there! Here to review. So, no one can argue this is a beautifully written piece. However, I feel as if this was written simply for the sake of being ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Classy Reviews [open]

    *bump*

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter one of Novel one

    Hey there! I liked this, and I think with a bit of fine tuning it will be a wonderful first chapter! Let me start off by saying that I love ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My latest drawings

    Wow! You're really good Flower!

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: DELETED.

    Hey there! My last review of the holiday season! Why not make it a seasonly story? This was very adorable, and I can totally see it as a childrens book. ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Skin Deep

    Hey there! I really like this. The theme is good and well thought out. I like how you played the part of someone who is modern, whether than someone who ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Dirty Doves (Chapter One) P1/2

    Hey there best friend! Ha, there we go using the same ol' name again! Don't worry, I have my favorite that I use in every story, too! As always, this ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Unseen [Chp. 1] revised!

    Hey there! This is very interesting. I'm excited to see what will happen after you edit and rewrite this. As is, this is more of a skeleton. I hope I ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Memories

    Hey there! This was good. It was a little bland at parts, and a little choppy at others, but I'm going to try to help you fix this. :) Quotes ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Summer peacock

    They're not showing.

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hiya!

    Hey there. I write those too! And you'll see me reviewing a lot in those two genres, so I should review something of yours when you post it. I'm excited! ...

    Dec 13, 2010


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