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Re: The Secret About Love
Aww, thanks you guys. PS. Tapatia and square, I love you :D
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: You Know You're a Nerd When...
You know you're a nerd when you post a picture of your nerd-day costume on this site ;)
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.7) [newly edited]
So, you are bordering on cliche. I have read all of this once or twice before! I wish you would add some surprise twist. I think I know what's going ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.5) [newly edited]
This is, without doubt, the best chapter so far. I mean, sure you rushed through it so quickly I was scared, but I think at this point, I really know ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Your Own Room Plate :)
Aww! All these are so cute! May I please have one? If you could put my name on here on it, captain.classy, that would be cool. And can it have ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.4) [newly edited]
Woah! You caught me off guard there. I mean, you could have fit more things in between the will scene and the wedding, right? I feel like you need to ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.3) [newly edited]
I agree with Pink that this is predictable. I knew exactly what was going to happen an entire chapter before! I really hope a huge twist is coming! :)
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Sounds of the Santoor (A Tale of Hundred strings)
Well, since everyone has talked grammar and nitpicks, I don't know what to do! This poem had perfect punctuation, and I loved it. I really couldn't find anything wrong :D ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Hello!
Hiya! Welcome to YWS! I see fruit already told you the reviews. I believe the ratio is 4:1 now, though. No caps, no chat speak, and try to stick to ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Classy Reviews [open]
Of course! I will be reading these over the next few days and comment on the seventh chapter as soon as I'm finished!
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: This Is For Real (part 2)
“So, did you talk to Stella?” Mike slipped up next to Justin, who was sitting in the same lawn chair he had slept in last night. “Yeah, she confirmed it.” ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Over His Head
No reviews! Well, we'll have to fix that :) So you didn't add much punctiation, so I will read add some for you. They will be underlined. Ex. , Over ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
Thats funny! 9/10!
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Demeter!
Aww, I missed your birthday :( Sorry! Have a very happy unbirthday!
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Disney
I go to Disneyland in California about once a month. It is my favorite place in the world, and I am sixteen. My family and I are about the biggest ...
Dec 7, 2009
