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Re: What makes you pick up a book?
Definitely genre. Fantasy for the win!
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: The Sizzling Six
Hi there! So I think the only thing wrong with this story is the grammar. What you need to do is read, a lot. Possibly other stories on here, or ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Graphic Novels
Alright, thanks guys!
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Graphic Novels
What are the rules on Graphic Novels, and where can I post one?
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Crusader's Flame [Chapter one part 1]
Hey there! So, this would be amazing if it were a graphic novel. However, it's not, therefore you need a little help in the 'looks' department, meaning I can't picture ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: --------
Hey there! As far as the rating goes, I'd just just do 12+ (if you want to be sure) since the content isn't too graphic, but still contains violence. To ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Did you miss the official polls?
I don't even know why I voted Pat Buchanan. It just felt right.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Underneath the Floorboards
Hey there Pers! I disagree with Panda (Sorry Panda!) when I sat that this poem flows amazingly. As I was reading it, a smooth and comforting voice came to mind. ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: The Darkest Love
Hey there! Just a tip, as a member who has been around for a while. If you put spacing between your paragraphs (you can do that by physically clicking the ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: The Harpist
Wow, El, you would make me cry! Quotes 'N' Comments She had been doing concerts at the music hall ever since her graduation from Julliard. So, your writing is beautiful, ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Engulfed By My Flames
Hey there! So, this poem was definitely fun to read. If there weren't so many rhymes and repetition of concepts, I would be very, very pleased with this poem. I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue- Iris Carter
Hey there! Wow, this is really good. It's extremely interesting, and fun to read. There are a few awkward parts, but I'll help you point those out. I'm going to ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: Darkness pops my Bubble
Hey ranter. Rantress. Ranterama! One big rant. But that's ok, at least you did it in a beautiful way. (I rhymed there, you see it! Of course you do.) The ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Drowning
Hey there! So this is a beautiful poem. I really like the imagery and this makes me feel warm inside. However, this is an extremely repetitive poem. There are only ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Classy Reviews [open]
After finals week I will get all of these done!
Jan 19, 2011
