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Re: I Wish I Could Feel the Rain
interesting passage cannoncomplex here, first off, my general impression is that this piece has a sense that a character is giving his/her own perspective on the surroundings. This has been ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Laundry Basket
cannoncomplex here to review the work, okay, my general impression was that the story lack a little depth and meaning to the laundry basket. From the spoiler, you indicated that ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Favorite Bands? Or songs?
my favorite is: Duvet by Boa
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Brevity
cannoncomplex here, And from the warning, i guessed you were right but the part with the knifing was a little surprise. Anyway, i'll review the story through context. Avoiding the ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: Working on Reviewer II, please help me....
hey, flower child...can you review this piece for me?
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: carbonCore's reviewRequests
can you review this piece: its a continuation of part 1
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Rhealism part 2
before reading, here is a little background on my purpose for the making of this story. the story of rhealism focus on the incident to character rather than the character ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Batman Whooooosh!
haha, this was a cute one. I love the expression of his face and the way that you transformed his 'cool, ready-to-kill' expression in some movie to something comical since ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Wildfire
ah, I like the concept in this piece for the usage of the second point of view and the wildfire. That is good but one thing that strike is that ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Iris. And the story after.
hello, I'm here to review just as I promise okay, i admit that this was an improvement. First off is that the context is there which is good and that ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: What is Normal?
i would agree. It would be better is someone would refute my arguments on normality. That way, it would be like philosophy debates.
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: It's What I Do
hi, i'm cannoncomplex and here to review your work okay as far as i read, this does seem like a short story but it got the mood of an autobiography. ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Campfire story
The man is not supposed to be a hero, actually i understand that the guy was not the hero...but from the way that has been structured int his piece, this ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Me: Not for the Easily Bored
Hello... Before i would comment, I would say that was indeed a mouthful, especcially the experience you got. That's greatly sad and dissapointing particularly the events that had been witnessed ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
8/10 that would be a very good feeling
Oct 13, 2010