cannoncomplex

Name: Cannon Age: 19 Appearance: Cannon has dyed black long hair that stretched to her lower back. She used to be blonde just like her twin, Iclisa, but she decided ...

Short Story because I love the idea of making up new characters, and to play with the style and the plot of writing. Novels would be second but i am ...

Okay, the question is interesting and i will do my best to argue that religion does not cause problems. I will focus on christianity since that's a global religion and ...

hi there ranger, can you review this for me? And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because ...

hi there silented1, can you review this for me? And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because ...

hey, bondgirl can you look at that story for me. And can i ask if you can review for me the effectiveness of the plot, the style of the story ...

hi, your first request, this is for a contest :) topic 75659

hi there, aquamarine, can you do a review for me. It's a bit long but its for a YWS contest. tpic 75659

hey, lily can you review a piece of work for a YWS contest? thanks. topic 75659

hey, eli, can you review this for a contest i'm doing? topic75659

The story is for a contest and basically it examines the mental illness: compulsive obsessive disorder. However, instead of simply showing the mental illness through the character's action, I tried ...

Ah, another religion essay Hey, Keith, CannonComplex here to critique your work. Well, i read your essay and find it interesting. the title gave me an insight of something anti-religion ...

cannoncomplex here to comment, okay the story is a little muddled but I can see that it was exploring the concept of reality/illusion in the way that the character in ...

cannoncomplex here, An interesting text. I like reading texts about religions and dialogues between them. I would comment one each paragraph, giving my own insights to your text. The first ...

6.9/10 I've seen that type of opening but the way you wrote it seemed intriguing. here's mine: After I finished Gottermann’s Concerto No. 1, I took the wooden arm and ...