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Re: My master
Well, I think that the story was indeed cute in the perspective of the dog worrying about his owner, and I like how you put something human to the dog ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: a warm breeze on a cool day
Well, the story here has a circular plot that is involve especcially how the story began with the fields and ends at the same time. it gets more circular by ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: dream sequence stryline
One of the most basic warnings when writing a story is never to cheat the reader especcially when the ending reveals that the story was a dream by the character. ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: 1st person and third person in the same story
Hey guys, I am currently writing a story to experiment a certain style where the 1st and 3rd person are both included. The purpose of it is to write a ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Fairview Academy RP [accepting & started!]
Priscilla "Boy, that headless sure is mad. Maybe its the brain. When she screamed at you, the brain popped and gushes of blood splattered all over the walls." "You really ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
Faustina Wakolski "yes," I uickly agreed, took the cup from his hand and drank it only to spit it out and burned my tongue in the process. Great, what did ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Fairview Academy RP [accepting & started!]
Priscilla After the old speech from the headmaster, i went back to the car to get my stuff. Being a headed, i need to act different. So instead of bringing ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Fairview Academy RP [accepting & started!]
* Yeah about the rooms, is there a dorm or do the students live nearby? If its dorm, can anyone be a roommate of Priscilla. I promise you won't regret ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
Okay, i'm going to restart. I wonder when hazel be posting... Faustina Wakolski I woke up as early as I can by about 4 am not to disturb my roommate ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Nikki: "Damnit, why is his sister here?" start an argument and probably into a fight. if you became the writer, and the writer became the character; what story will you ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
Faustina Wakolski So this is my room? Well judging from what i knew about dorms, i'll have a roomate. Great. i hope I looked alirght. i don't want anyone to ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
okay, faustina's alright with hazel
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
*I think i better be posting Faustina Wakolski (change her last name) So this is the school? I don't think writing fits to an art, and that its the only ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Breeze Arts Academy
faustina needs a roommate but does not mind who the person she assigned to is.
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Fairview Academy RP [accepting & started!]
Name: Priscilla Danish Age: 19 Appearance: She has long black hair with three locks of fringe on her forehead. She has brown eyes, and wears a teddy bear hat as ...
May 25, 2011
