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I lol'd. What can I say. Anyways, one part that bothered me stylistically was: She works hard for the money Always, there is an excuse She works hard for the ...

Well, this being a piece about necrophilia, I rated it for content, not so much blatant cussing or the such.

Hey Noelle :) I'm going to provide you with the honest critiquing you requested :D. I'll start by saying that I like the deep concepts you're trying to convey in ...

Hello fruityfortissimo :D So your poem is pretty good, but I'm going to help you make it even better, so here goes: 1) Right off the bat, your first stanza ...

Hello, ChiquitaPeroPicosa :) So I like your poems' honesty and use of rhyme, but I have a few things to point out; first of all though, I'm going to tell ...

I'm currently saving up for a new guitar (it's getting to be a pain in the butt switching between tunings everytime I want to play a different band) and am ...

They ran from existance, though they existed as two, where none could save them from where kisses consumed. Engulfed by their senses, entralled by their being. Uncovered, discovered promises were ...

Some people might have seen my forum posts asking for help with thinking of a topic for a myth; well, I ended up thinking of one on my own, and ...

Yep, Baywolf got what I meant, sorry for the confusing sentence :P And okey dokes, I see what you mean with the whole tossed salad thing, that's a standpoint I've ...

Howdy Jenna :D I second everything Baywolf had to say about YWS, and I hope you have lots of good experiences here. Though as part of this site is doing ...

Possibly, possibly, I'll take it into consideration. ^^

Sometimes I feel like my words should be put in a fucking creed, but it'd be a creed fit for black mass for all the truth behind my verbose lies. ...

Howdy. Ooooh I saw Foo Fighters live in Ottawa, they were absolutely fantastic, Dave Grohl is nothing short of a god. O>O And b-movies, eh? Nice to hear someone around ...

I did, however, feel that the second to last stanza about the childhood dreams and stagnation was a little forced. That is, I didn't feel like it flowed with the ...

Actually, depending on what aspect you are talking about, I say either "Write what you know," or "Write what you want to know." Of course, these can both apply to ...