candywriter

Pretty darn good piece of story here! I can’t wait to see how she handles the stalker later on. I won’t be a grammar police-girl, but there a few grammatical ...

Hi, BhavyMehta123! Thanks for the review! I%u2019m so glad you liked it! As soon as I get it finished and posted on another site I use Andy I get enough ...

I really like this story! It’s got good dialogue, pretty good characters, and a well-explained beginning. But one thing I’m wondering: what is Julia? I mean, I know she’s a ...

Thanks for the clarification! It really does help. I%u2019ll work on fixing all that stuff and I hope to have the renewed version out soon!

Hiya, Lia5Giba! Thanks for the review! Don%u2019t worry; this isn%u2019t an autobiography, so your comments are definitely welcome! Thank you for telling me that it felt stiff sometimes; this was ...

Thanks for the review! It really helps. I actually do have a question. Where you said that it%u2019s more stiff (not really the way people talk), I really don%u2019t know ...

This is pretty good! This is the first chapter I’ve read, so I’m hoping to find parts 1-5 so I can catch up. Well-rounded characters, deep thoughts, wow, I love ...

This is pretty good! This is the first chapter I’ve read, so I’m hoping to find parts 1-5 so I can catch up. Well-rounded characters, deep thoughts, wow, I love ...