candywriter

I really love this chapter! I can’t wait to read more. What is the context around these characters? I’m longing to know more about Emerald. She sounds particularly interesting to ...

Hello! Let’s just start out by saying that, “YES!” The premise is strong enough to keep developing. It’s a great idea! I will say though, that maybe you could give ...

This is a sad story; your description was accurate. But it was also kind of confusing. Who exactly are Ashley, Stuart, and everyone? Where do they live? Why is it ...

Pretty darn good piece of story here! I can’t wait to see how she handles the stalker later on. I won’t be a grammar police-girl, but there a few grammatical ...

This is a really beautifully written piece! It’s a lovely description of how an infant sees the world, and then we see her mother, adoring her daughter. I wish it ...

Well, coronavirus-inspired or not, this is good. The Red Plague sounds horrible to get, like the girls and everyone else are panicking over. Maybe give a little more backstory on ...

Whoa this is good. I won’t be a grammar police-girl but there are quite a few grammatical mistakes here. They don’t take away from the story, I just thought I’d ...

Another great work! This catches me up a little bit, as I’m having to read it backwards, as I started in chapter 6. I caught a typo near the end- ...