camronmarshall

Got your message and logged on immediately. You may not see this so I will email you my thoughts on the poem. Though I suspect this poem may be something ...

No. I couldn't find a hidden meaning, because it wasn't hidden. It was glaring.

It's work of this nature that leads me to no longer pay the 'Featured' section any attention. Because, seriously, this isn't great. I don't believe this has left anyone inspired ...

Thank you Joshua, I have read some of your work and I will write an appraisal of something of yours soon.

Though I wasn't a Rebel or a Weasel from the Underground, I once despaired totally of having a sensible place in society. My hopelessness was so thorough that thoughts of ...

You need to put in a hint of conflict, foreshadow something bigger so we keep reading. You lost me pretty quick

I'm not a big fan of this simple rhyme scheme and shallow metaphor. But it seems to work on some level so well done.

That's nice. I like the addition of the picture too. I hate war, you can say that. That's something you are definitely alloud to hate

I am, a black satin ribbon twisted into a smile on the cold cement A whisper at midnight, between cupped hands and flashlit lovers Like the moment I realised a ...

hmm, not bad. Not bad at all. It wasn't good either. In fact, it's to early to tell because this is so short.

I really didn't expect to see this sort of thing when I signed up for this website. It's intelligent and well constructed. This reminds me a little of 'American Pyscho.' ...

*Yawn* really didn't do much for me, I'm afraid.