callmelola

This was really good! I applaud you! I cannot see the sun, for the sky has turned to black. That drew me in. I thought the imagery in the first ...

I loved the last line of it. The poem as a whole was very moving. However, I thought that breaking from "they" to "it" on the mouth part depleted from ...

I enjoyed the way it ended, asking if she is vain. It isn't often that people think that someone would hide themselves because they think they're too good. Mostly its ...

I have to agree with Lemonly. The first four lines were my favorite in the poem, they were just worded well. I like how you kept the whole cancer is ...