callmeLily73

I sat in my large, and now dark dressing room. I was going trough my millions of pounds of mail, just looking for one pink envelope I get every month ...

This did catch my attenchtion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to write a story on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to see where this goes!!!!!!!!!!!!! this could be the basis of a best seller!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Messag

you must write more! I'm serious! I was completely absorbed in the story and forgot what was happening around me! This is an amazing story and I have to read ...

I like how you pointed out the horrible reality of I have found about the romance genre is that people think it's all about sex, I have been saying that ...

I love your story! But what an immature jerk! Now I'm mad at that boy! seriously, I really think that kid should be hit with a bat, or ran over ...

I like your poem. It has a beat like a song and rhymes really well. I seem to chant it, as I'm reading, and I cant stop! it's worth repeating! ...

I love it! your story really captured my in. I was completely absorbed and I could see everything so vividly! you have such great talent! Are you planning on publishing ...

I love your story! I love that you chose two people who don't have something most people do. You should write from the beginning, write how they met, and how ...

write a story around this! This is really good! It captures my mind and makes me want to know more! I cant wait until you write further, tell the whole ...

I love your story! it totally makes me jump off my seat! I was absorbed so much in the story that I for got all about what was happening around ...

I love your story! I might sound like an ELA teacher but it has nice use of adjectives and discripsions! I was completly absorbed into the story as if it ...

I love yur story! Its truley a origanal. But maybe adding something to this The truck’s getting closer but the weird thing is it seems like everything’s slower will make ...

here is the first chapter! thank you for the advise!! :D

The room was decorated with candles, balloons, and a giant banner that said; “ Welcome May Belle!” I groaned. I liked the decorations and the idea of a warm welcome. ...

I had the weirdest dream last night! I was being chased by a 50 foot mango! He had bunny ears and a fake mustash! then he chased me around the ...