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Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 3 p2)
Lets make one thing clear, I’m not an idiot. I know that once the fire of a car reaches the gas tank, things aren’t pretty. Adrenalin went through my veins ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 3)
The sunrise woke me up the next day, a con about living in a tower above the tree line. Then the smell of French toast made me get dressed and ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Sins
Your poem is really good and really speaks to me!!!!!! It really is a true work of art. I makes me wonder, smile, and feel sad. All at the same ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: i am
I really like your poem. It shows your personality shining through it, and I can feel the troubles you have been through. keep on writing :D :) :P :wink: :mrgreen: ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Deadly Secrets-Chap. One (Title help?)
You did a great job again! I like how you described things good and used descriptive words. I could see the image in my head so clearly. I also like ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: It Doesn't Matter
aw what a beautiful story....... That was really good. you should write from the beginning, how they met and stuff. How they fall in love. Message me if you do! ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Ignorance was never Bliss: *correct* Prologue and Chapter 1
Hi! Lily agien! I just wanted to say know whyn is spelled wrougn. Are you saying when or why? Other than that love it :D :) :P :wink: :mrgreen: :smt003 ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Ghost's of my Life's Past (Part 1)
Hi! I am Lily and I really love your story! please write more! And message me when you do! I cant wait! I only found one mistake; Mary and the ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Escaping the Whisper Chpt 2
I love your story! I want to read more! Please message me when you write more! this story makes me all suspicious.... I like it! Write more fast! And I ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Escaping the Whisper Chpt 1
I love your story!!!!!!!!!!! I can see everything vividly with your discripsions, and the suspens makes me want to scream!!!!!! :thud: I like how you gave the person a vision ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
I love your story! you need to write more! seriously! I am very exciuted to read more! It is very creative and interesting and I was completly absorbed by the ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 2 part 3)
All was silent in the island country of Tarrien, off the coast of Britain. Their king, Patrick Dylan, has passed away in his sleep. As he was young, he was ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 2 part 2)
“So you seriously don’t remember visiting us?” Rachel said as we walked outside after the party. I sighed. “ It’s not you, I hit my head a lot growing up, ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Brazilian Fruit
I love the origenality and the creativity of your story!!!!!!!! It really made me read at he edge of my seat!!!!!!!!!! It is a fastinating story! Now im in the ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 1)
here is the next chapter!
Feb 1, 2010