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Re: Untitled (Scene one)
I love your script! I cant wait for you to write more! please do! It is very good! You have alot of talent! Keep on writing! And Privite Message me ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: 13 reasons why...
I love your poem! It implys its genre beautifuly unlike others- very dramatic! I like your way of words- very different than most, You surley have talent! Keep on writing!! ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Sunset Magic
I like your poem, and I give it a 7. It has a wonderful title and theme that gives the person a good mantal image baut maybe it wouldnt hurt ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: How Do You...
I do like your poem and it really is creative. I give it a 6. but maybe it could be a 8 or 9 if you spike it up a ...
Mar 21, 2010 -
Re: Lost Childhood
I love your poem! it really expreses the pain of the story teller. I might cry! I love your comparison of lawers and doors! really creative! keep on writing! :) ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Shooting Stars
I really love this!!!!!!!!!!! :!: :!: :!: :!: It is so catchy and origonal and creative!!!!!!!!!! :!: :!: :!: :!: I love it!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: I played a game that ended
I love your writing! It has lots of creativity and individuality and I really love how you express your self in it. Keep on writing! :D :) 8) :lol: :P ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Good-bye
I really love this, and it's like I can hear the music to it inside my head! I also can feel the sadness and pain your going through, and I ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: I'll be a Sparrow
I really love your poem! Its really nice, and I can relate to it. You write really well and I can feel the wind agenst my skin as I read! ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: The Evening Light
I love your poem! It really speaks to me and I love how you describe the feeling of the night you love. I like how you put a rymn and ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: The tip of my Tongue
I love your poem! It really speaks to me and I like how you set up a chant in it to keep me reading. I love how you discribe well ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Tides
I love your poem! I love how you express how the tides have to do with your love, and how they are important. You set up a beat to it, ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: The Monster That Is Mine
I like your poem! It is very good, and you used a good title that drew me in. You keep the reader guessing, and you told your story in a ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Vampire
Your poem is very ideal, yet very well written. It is very descriptive, and you use allot of words that aren't ideal or used everyday, and you don't go on ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 4 p2)
I heard the throbbing of the chopper go over the trees and the castle, shaking everything in his way. Suddenly, Rachel disappeared from beside me. I looked to Denise, who ...
Feb 14, 2010
