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Re: Love and Running
Oh my gosh you're really talented at this! Unlike me who can't take pictures of anything, Have you thought about becoming a photographer? I mean I think it's something you ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: G, Averi and Vanessa Callen
please review! oh and I have to publish my fall writing piece on here sometime next week for a grade and it needs revies so keep watch, review please, please
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Abby Callen
G Pov Both Gibbs' and my team were investigating several murders of female petty officers, and since they overlapped we agreed to work together. I was excited this meant I ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: G, Averi and Vanessa Callen
Callen Pov Were all pregnant women so moody and cranky? I made a mental note to ask Sam about it when i got to HQ, I took one last look ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: There's Nothing More We Can Do
I only have one word for this poem wow! so deep, and professional, espically for you age! you have a writing wisdom far beyond your years, most of the kids ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Reconciliation
okay so not really my taste in litature but i gotta give you some points for creativeness this is the first piece that had an idea like this but i ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Dear Stranger...
wow i never thought i would actually read something that deep on a website, that wasn't like an author's official site or something but i think you just nailed it! ...
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Re: Candy Kiss
I really enoyed your poem one of my favorites, i have like a gillion of them but hey i'm a girl i'm aloud to be complicated keep going at it.
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Sweet, Fractured Night.
very dark and emotional poem but it gets your mind acroos quite ckearky and very rarely do i enjoy reading dark poems, okay i don't enjoy the terror but a ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: A Letter to the Rapist
this topic is a very sensitive one and i'm honestly quite surprised that you would share it with so many people but i have a high respect for you and ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Let's Pretend
so this poem definatly relates to almost every single person in the world, weather they speak this language or not and i just wanna say i am once again very ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go
so i feel like i'm reading this straight out of a poetry book and i want to gongratualte you on your own deep and insightful thought however on the line ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Resizing Images (Outdated/Archived)
well i usually don't follow directions when given but seeing as how you spent your own time writing them down i will follow them to the best of my small ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: I cut myself
this poem had raised my motherly concernc which is funny cause im younger but still i have the urge to protect everyone i don't care if you're dependent or not ...
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: through the mask
He smiles and jokes but I see the pain All new to him and all brought on so suddenly He had a glowing about him that made it hard to ...
Oct 9, 2011
