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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Free

    Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". --- Her footsteps pit ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Free

    Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". --- Her footsteps pit ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Milk & Cream

    Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The prologue of my yet-to-be-named novel

    Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The prologue of my yet-to-be-named novel

    Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...

    Jul 15, 2009


Poetry comes alive to me through recitation.
— Natalie Merchant