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Re: Free
Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". --- Her footsteps pit ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Free
Hey, it's Caitlin! Okay, to work... :D She will not not look back. ---C--- I like the present-tense here, saying "she will" instead of "she was". --- Her footsteps pit ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: Milk & Cream
Hyello :D I really really liked this. It brought out the anger of domestic violence, and what goes on in the minds of those on the recieving end. However, there ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The prologue of my yet-to-be-named novel
Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The prologue of my yet-to-be-named novel
Hey everyone :) Thanks for critiquing, this is probably the shortest piece I've ever written, and I've concluded that prologues are quite a handful. For now, though, I will not ...
Jul 15, 2009
