caerauboy

Vast beauty like moonlights reflected on sea, Ripples of lights and rains droplets, A strange swell a feeling discourages me, Feeling of hope rising on this wave full of ambuigity. ...

I didn't really enjoy this poem, as it seems you have slipped into the narrow minded view that all 'chavs' are bad and smoke and drink, many of my friends ...

I really like the poem, and how abrupt it is at times and its goes well with the poem, how so many people start so innocent and young and are ...

I enjoyed this poem. Short and sweet uplifting poem.I think it sums up the love in everybody and that before the death or the last thing you want to tell ...

This is quite a dark and interesting poem, but its a very good one too. I think it's clever how you've created a sense of emptiness by saying out of ...

Down these roads we walk, between our silence and our talk, We watched the sun go down over these shops, as it painted red the roofs, In the safety of ...

I'm still working on a title for this poem so any suggestions would be great. I wrote it with Shakespears play Julius Caeser in mind as it says he turned ...

I found the poem good but also disturbing, but disturbing as it is it kept me reading and thinking, what could it be that made you feel this way. You ...