caerauboy

I was deaf in one ear when I heard the angel sing, This insanity is clarity finally I can see everything, A message from the heavens was being sent down, ...

thanks for the review the reason its not in capitals for mr man is that I'm trying to show the lack of importance of 'mr man' and dunno is Ely ...

It seems that sociability just isn’t my forte, Well in that case I don’t know what to say. Socially inept within this community in which I’m expected to be in ...

I enjoyed this poem, its as if you've managed to fit in how a lot of people don't seem to realise how good things are when they have them and ...

I really enjoyed the poem I like how it reflects how a lot of people try to cling on to they're idealistic ideas and begin believing in them so much ...

hey, I really enjoyed this poem and feel I'm not sure how exactly but really happy that its my poem that inspired this poem :) I like how you made ...

I really enjoyed this poem :) it seems quite a nice, uplifting poem and the imagery created from such simple descriptions is really good.

I think this poem is good, and shows the darkness and truth of alcoholism that its because of something, to drown some pain out or to stop them thinking about ...

Hey the song seems pretty depressing and show the blatant theme or sorrow, depression and loss. It also shows the feelings and thoughts of lots of people dealing with loss ...

Hey I think you kept the flow of this going really well, the song seems good and would be an awsome song to rap.

Really good, well done :)

Oppressed, depressed, compressed in this hell where I dwell, Outshone, out of line? Who or what’s the shrine I seek. I see power surrounding me, drowning me; undermining me. The ...

The poem is ok, but could be lots better, its too repetetive and typical of what many would expect from a teenager, the over use of hate is too common ...

I really enjoyed the poem. The whole story of it was great. I really liked how you used religion in a story part of which is about temptation in a ...

Hey. I enjoyed this poem the anger and fury throughout is obvious and simply shown though with a confusing but good style of writing. It seems you do as I ...