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thanks heaps guys, the star means here :D:D just for the record i meant no connection to vampires, its just sort of how it came out at the time :P:P ...

Tragedy The loss of what could have been Like northen lights no longer seen. The faint tune of a mocking bird Fading fast, hear not a word. Only the scilence ...

lol, thanks everyone, im glad you picked it apart, in a funny way i find this more helpful than most of my english teachers. I am considering writing more on ...

Thanks so much, yeah,I know, my grammers pretty bad :P:P. My teacher told me to continue the story, but i dont really know where its going. I figure I'll keep ...

Very good question. some fear is with us form birth, think about little kids and babies, they're often scared of loud noises, lightning and the dark. Why? Noises and bright ...

Do you know why Guantanamo Bay is located in Cuba? because its not restricted by the USA laws. I believe Guantanamo Bay shows the really evil in human beings and ...

HEY people, how you all doing. So I had this english assignment and, well, this is it. Tell me what you think. Enjoy The bitter wind went straight to his ...

Well, I like the image, but it is really short, I think you could expand on this. The simplicity of it makes it very unique, I like your style in ...

umm, well, i agree that its a hard topic to tackle, buu well, u really need to work on it, the stanza structure was all over the place, there wasnt ...

DAMN MAN, i've never read any of your stuff before, but im gonna check it out after i write this. ok, so, like everyones been saying, the tence switch is ...

HEYY EVRYBODY well, im a nerd, luv english, nd in sum spare tym rote ma own version of or class poem WB Yeats-The Coat, i think it makes sence :P:P, ...

SWEET dude, thats massive man, i loved the rythm, i loved th vocab, i loved the expression, and i thought th way u broke it into stanzas was really well ...

hey dude, iv glanced at some of your stuff before, buu i can honestly say i really noticed this one,its simple, quiet, it makes sence, and its cute :D:D, which ...

lol yer hey dude, i graduate 2011, nd i use to think th same thing, :P:P, man i was lyk srsly obsessed with the aztecs and mayans when i was ...

HEYY PPL im lucy, dnt really mind wat u call me yer im new :P:P buu the site looks awsumneshful :D:D i joind awhile ago nd havnt postd enythin, just ...