burncourt

Long,bare fingers extend as the willow bends then the twigs retract agreeing to the winds pact all comes and all goes but the wind forever blows

I think that it was thought-out but as you said quickly explained. Take some time and a breather and fine tune it. Fix grammar and little stuff to reword it ...

I loved your imagery and the way your words flow. It sounded very good and had a feel to it. Good job.

im new here. iwrite a little bit of evrything but love to write short descriptions of different things i see. I respond to anything from idiot to Cody so feel ...