burgs2009

Thanks for all the comments guys, i appreciate it, so does she.

I may get in trouble for this, but sod it. I'm all for constructive criticism, I think it’s essential in helping new and young writers develop and improve. However, you ...

great little poem, loved the imagary! the only thing i would say is to sort out your punctuation and where you're breaking your sentances. Other than that i think it ...

hi there! I definately wouldn't say this was a rubbish poem. but at the same time i'm not sure whether it is good or bad! :D The language you use ...

Thanks guys, that means a lot. I'm glad i got her accent right! :D I havn't started the next chapter yet, but i'll try to get it done as soon ...

Hi Sapphirejay, thanks for the review. I tend not to reply to reviews but i just wanted to clear up a few things. A lot of the changes you've suggested, ...

Thanks for all the great reviews guys. I honestly i'd get better one's for country girl! Again, anything you think will make it better, let me know. Perhaps i'll even ...

Thanks for the comments guys, i'll definately take them on board. I'll admit it was just an idea that came to me and was thus fairly rushed, so any ideas ...

a subject i'm all to familiar with! Well written on the whole, although in the line: As each day passes we grow more insecure, No longer the child we were ...

Although short, i enjoyed reading this and will have to look out the rest. I think most of the grammatical and punctuation mistakes have been pointed out so i won't ...