bunnie_i_am

Okay, I like it. It sounds a little like the Twilight series. I'm sorry, you really probably don't want to hear that, do you? I agree with the other folks, ...

I like it. “Yea, it’s just kinda sad, what happened to my father…” this moves alittle to fast to me. Save important stuff like that for latter on in the ...

I wail as he struggles to discover his keys. “I can’t find them!” he panics, digging in his pockets. I start jogging in place, hoping to keep warm as I ...

That was awsome. It held my attion, which is very hard to do. I have always been a sucker for fairytales, and them being real would be sweet. Oh, my ...

I walked inside my house after dance, hopefully finding my mom already asleep. My hope was waisted when I saw her waiting for me in the kitchen. My mom was ...

I liked it. I can see it becoming a longer story and something I would read. It would be a very interesting one to read. I like the airplane simile, ...

Hey, I posted something and I have no idea if it's good and no one is leaveing reviews! I know I sound a little impationt, but I really want to ...

Hey, I liked it. It was a little confusing, though. What does he have to consider? What is he scared of, commitment? (Sorry if it's not spelled right!) Does he ...

I enter the room as the familiarity of another life floods through me. I stare at the mirrored wall and the two wooden bars that wraps around the it. The ...

Hey, my name is alex and im new! I love to write and i might be good at it. My friends say i am, but there my friends. :wink: Im ...

Hi. I'm new! Sweet, right? Well, I'm not fast at typing so it takes me a while to get something done sorry. as long as i'm writing, right? bye.

Hi. I'm new! Sweet, right? Well, I'm not fast at typing so it takes me a while to get something done sorry. as long as i'm writing, right? bye.

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! THERE WAS A FEW THINGS THAT BOTHERED ME THOUGH. WHEN IT GOES INTO LUKE'S POINT OF VEIW T NEEDS TO GIVE SOME NOTICE. I ...

It was okay.