bunnie_i_am

I've already talked to chincilla and I'm going to be the Werewolf leader!!!!!!! profile name: Aballa Mary Yante Age: 18 appearance: Short, 4'7, brown hair and gold eyes! vampire/vampire power ...

I love this poem!!!!!! =) Somy favorite part? Easy!!!! I walk in the shadows and yearn for the sun, for darkness end light, can never be won. That is so ...

I sat on the edge of the river, remembering how it felt to sit in the sun, how it felt to feel the cool water after the long, hot day. ...

I really like this, I'm not even lieing this time! Welll, everyone else already toke care of all the grammer mistakes so I get to do the fun things!!!!! I ...

Okay, here is one of the shorter chapters, but it has a lot in it! Hope you injoy!! ______________ Lance Being rushed to the hospitalshould be nothing new to me. ...

Well, most people has already done the hard work, so I'm just going to say what I think! :D It was a very good work, and it's really indept (I ...

This is extremly good!!!!!!! I'm not even joking!!! (Not that I would in the first place, but you get my point) I really like this part Newcomer." The word was ...

I'm extremly confused, but that is pretty much how I always am! =) My answer, is therefore, NO!!! =) -bunnie

wow, that was pretty good. the only thing i saw was be sure you captilize (spelling=P) the first letter of every sentence. I really liked, now I'm going to go ...

Before you start reading, I know there's not a whole lot of romance going on in it yet, ut I had to work up to it. I promise, it's soon! ...

Hey!! Well, I really like this. It's down to earth, and someting that could happen. It has a little poetic touch to it too. Well, I couldn't find much wrong ...

I saw a few gramar mistakes, but i'll leave those for others to point out! =) The one thing that really kinda bothered me was this... "Look there's no time ...

How am I suppose to live in a house so empty? A house with nothing in it but furniture and walls in it?A house with no love, and no family. ...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to no what happens!!!!!!!!!!! Urg, I hate school!!!!!!!!! Write MORE!!!! Now!!!!!!!!!! Haha jk. But still right more!!!! Do they become Vampres??? Wha

Awwww, that's so sad. =( Okay, overall it was really good. There was only one pert that confused me. It's as if you've taken to me, a gun. It toke ...