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Slowly I sat up, holding my aching head. I felt as though it had been slammed against a rock twenty times, and the rest of me didn't feel much better. ...

I really like this peice, it's very realistic to Herminones charecter, but one thing that bothered me was this- “Accio rope!” I know you mentioned her studing a head, but ...

That's soo good!!! I really enjoyed it! I like how it changes on the last two lines, tell your friend she's done a good job!! Oh, and welcome to YWS!!! ...

Hey, I really liked you poem, it had me from the start. There was only one part that seemed akward to me- Happily, I latched onto you,like an ignorant puppy, ...

Thank you! =-D And Classy, I know it doesn't really seem like a prolouge, but it will when the first chapter comes. =-D Okay, well, thanks again, I'll write some ...

Thank you!!! =-D I'm just about to start on the first chapter soon, so I'll let you know when it's up!!! =-D Maybe then, you'll still be screaming "more, more, ...

I sat in the front seat of my mom's beat up car, staring at the ongoing mountains, that transformed into plains, and finally into trees. This was the only thing ...

I searched young writers, because I wanted more opinions on my stories! =-D

Please Reply!!!!! Most my friends really like it, but I would like other opinions.... =-D Please and Thank you! CHAPTER III Cami "Follow me,” Aballa said. We walked back to ...

Wow, that was really good! It was short, but stil good. But in the short part, not only did it make me laugh (it's a good thing), but it also ...

O my gosh! that was sooo sweet!!! I only saw one problem, “Nick?” I asked, turning to face him. “Yes?” He said softly, his words almost lost in the breeze. ...

CHAPTER II Aballa I hate myself! I have caused this horrible pain, in two people! Ugh! Did I always have to ruin other people's lives? First that poor boy, I ...

OMG!=) That's soooooo good! I want to no more! =) tall me more! =) Write more please. I love how it describes Leo! =) =) I want to no more! ...

So, I changed a little bit, and I know I first put it on here, like a thousand years a go, but oh well! =-D __________________________ CHAPTER I Cami I ...

That's really interesting =))((= please keep me updated!!! I disagree with Chinchilla, Bunny the best!!!! =)))(((= I deserve all those!! :piratedthread: :smt117 :smt064 :smt059 :smt060 :elephant: :thu