bumblebee99

I liked this one as well its definitely interesting, although it kinda leaves you at a cliff it makes me want to read on! Like stated before there were some ...

I like it so far, the twist at the end was great. There were some confusing parts at the beginning and maybe you should describe the characters some more to ...

So far it seems interesting, and I want to know what happened in the car accident. How this will turn into a Greek myth I haven't the slightest and I ...

I think that you do need more description even though people were asking for less. I find it helps with the picture your trying to create overall its a great ...