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  • Romantic Novels Re: New Discoverys Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review, I originally had more to the second chapter but it seemed more fit to go into the next chapter. So i will post the third chapter ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: New Discoverys Chapter 2

    Hey so here's chapter 2 of my first novel I did my best to add in the critiques that I was given, so tell me what you think. - Bumblebee ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: With Arms Around the Engine (My Biggest Project So Far)

    as probably said above this piece is intense, there is so much going on but its not to busy, i like it a lot:). your work definitely reminds me of ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year

    some of your stuff reminds me of Dali. If you don't know who that is you should really look him up from the stuff you have done here it looks ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: New Discoverys Chapter 1

    You didn't insult me I find constructive criticism more helpful than if you were to say oh yeah it was great I loved it, if you know what a mean. ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Purple Dancer

    Hey, well its overall a good picture but it could use some work like said before the proportions are off but I do admire you for using pen I am ...

    May 13, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Piano

    I see your point with the wonky keys but I didn't have a straight edge, the keys get smaller at the end because they are farther away, the closer something ...

    May 12, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Knights of Dawn Prologue part 2

    I liked this one as well its definitely interesting, although it kinda leaves you at a cliff it makes me want to read on! Like stated before there were some ...

    May 12, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Knights of Dawn Prolouge/Pilot

    I like it so far, the twist at the end was great. There were some confusing parts at the beginning and maybe you should describe the characters some more to ...

    May 12, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Piano

    OK so this piece combines two things I love the piano and art I hope you like it! -Bumblebee :D

    May 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: New Discoverys Chapter 1

    You did not offend me in any way shape or form reviews help me out a lot, It is my first time writing but I do draw so I just ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: New Discoverys Chapter 1

    Well this is the first chapter of a possible book. Im new to all this so if you could review that would be great. Thanks -Bumblebee :D Chapter 1 “Your ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach mixed media

    I thought about it but I didn't want it to seem too busy with all the colors it would add. -Bumblebee :D

    May 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: scary artwork

    I don't really see how she's a nurse other than the syringe and the title but it dose look very realistic and your shading is magnificent did you use oils ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beach mixed media

    I can see what your saying about the randomness of it, but the design in the corner is supposed to be abstract way to draw waves, it started out as ...

    May 7, 2010


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