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Re: The Death of Her
AMAZING. I loved it. It had great detail. I love how you described the angel's beauty and then ventured off into the feeling and emotions your charcter felt through out ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Savior: Chapter One
Hey, I have to agree with xDudettex on this one.. a lot of punctuation missing. Also, on one of the parts, it says: has a vouluptuous and [...] hair." What ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Blind Rage Chapter One
i'm new at help me "Hey, Ella. Could you help me with this," my brother, Marcus says. he points at his suitcase, which weighs about three pounds. I snicker. "Yeah, ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Bach's Lullaby--Ch. 1
i like it. very good details about different things. keep working on it. dont give up.
Oct 28, 2011