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This is a very good piece, to say the least. I love how you personified hope, and your imagination, your imagery, is astounding. You made two versions of the same ...

My neighbor was a writer, Kept to himself, never said a word. Never had a friend, never needed one, Instead choosing to separate himself with the world. I would watch ...

Haha :-). You pick your nose like all of us do! Except you have the guts to tell the whole world about it. That aside, the poem, though short, made ...

Man, this is great. I loved it. I rarely do approve of such short poems, but it is certainly a breath of fresh air. I have been browsing for quite ...

Wow. The poem is absolutely amazing. I love it when writers, poets find a new way to tell a story. The way you tie what was left inside the house ...

Note: Penglipur Lara in traditional Malay culture is the local storyteller for every village or town. Oh Mister Storyteller, story teller, Tell me a tale or two. Of Kings and ...

I really love the first stanza Change that shouldn't have felt new, tiny center square of a rubik's cube, but we watched those colors diffuse; now where there's white, belongs ...

This is quite a good piece, though maybe the first stanza is slightly 'out' in my opinion as I stand slightly confused as from whose point of view is this ...

The market is bustling. Rows of stalls, gleaming bright lights, Cries from vendors, buyers alike, Smoke rising, filling the still night air, Food made and sold nearly everywhere. One Char ...

This is really deep. I love: It transpires in a sliver of silence, the queen’s demise by a surgeon’s blade, and: In the Hall of Mirrors she pauses, unsure which ...

Hey there! Good poem Great topic. But, then again, there are a few problems here and there like the repitition of 'back' in the first stanza What's a car-crash heart? ...

Dear retrodisco666 I thank you for your advice, especially on punctuation But I have purposely skipped out on my commas because, well, I love to write my poems in short ...

I love this poem. This 'daughter' seems like a very interesting person. Maybe you can make it more interesting by making a comparison with the parents, maybe showing differences in ...

What up? Great poem, I love the description and the pure emotions. You give perspectives to small details, such as that 'small hidden breath'. Nice. Yet the way you shape ...

I write this now Under the sunshine bright skies The shade of a cedar tree casting a cooling shadow over me As pen touches paper I remember Nostalgia of past ...