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Re: I Dare You
Wow, I just got chills! Great story and the only real problems I could find were the ones that other people pointed out. Though I did find a few grammar ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Chapter one. Scarlet Kiss
You're doing pretty good so far in my opinion, but maybe more detail. Like, what are the character's names? What are they wearing? What are their expressions?
May 6, 2008