bueberry

Can you hear me? Be honest, do you really, truely, hear me? Not only what I'm saying, but the things I don't. The little things I don't really want anyone ...

I thought it was a little awkward at first, I didn't know if Roxo was a cat of a dog. "Roxo lay on his back in the long grass watching ...

I think wanting to be remembered is in human nature. Why else do people ruin their lives for something they claim to love? I'm obviously human, so I want to ...

OK, you've made it this far with life. And most still have so much more to look forward to. But don't forget your past, never. If you give up your ...

Wow, I just got chills! Great story and the only real problems I could find were the ones that other people pointed out. Though I did find a few grammar ...

Lynn was out shopping with her mom after playing hooky on the last day of school. She never got to see her mom; she was a single parent with a ...

I started writing back in second grade in my free time. The first story I wrote was a really bad four and a half page retelling of Romeo and Juliet. ...

"Hey Kira! Wait up!" Genna called out to her friend. Kira stopped and turned around to wait. "What's up with you? Today was the las day of school this year! ...

I absolutely loved this story! It's short and to the point so far, but it just tugs at your heart strings, making you want more. I was almost in tears ...

Why was his daughter out there in the first place? Shouldn't she have known not to be out? Where was her mother during all of this It's a good story ...

Wow, with that short tidbit you had me in tears by the end. I agree with the replies before me, the spacing is kinda strange, made my eyes go cross ...

You're doing pretty good so far in my opinion, but maybe more detail. Like, what are the character's names? What are they wearing? What are their expressions?