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Re: The Adventures of Rory Quinn and the Q36-Matter Modulator
Interesting concept. Not sure I can say I like the pace you've set your story at. You are very eager to get to a certain point in the story as ...
Jul 20, 2015 -
Re: And I Can't Utter A Single Word, Imagine Do I feel...?
Hello Eros. I hope you're doing well. From the first stanza...I am shaking my head at your interesting grammar and flow: "Seeing my own classmates Flirting over my soulmate And ...
Jul 20, 2015 -
Re: a tale of friendship
It's a bad idea to be cliche. The way this person woke up. The way they had no idea where they were: (Another couple of seconds passed by, and he ...
Jun 18, 2015