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Hi amandajo, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get to know the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you :) Re: your poem, ...

Hi HorseradishCares, Welcome to YWS! Always nice to see a new 'face' on the forums :) Re: your poem, well, wow. That was kind of bizarre. The rhyme scheme is ...

Hi kingolions, Firstly, I have to say that I appreciate how difficult it can be to write a happy poem. Poetry seems to lend itself much better to sadness and ...

Haha thanks, I just found that. But subscribing sends an email as well, which gives me no excuse to be lazy, so. Also! Your review is done! :)

Hi Rosey Unicorn, Here's the review you requested :) To be honest, I saw this poem yesterday but didn't comment on it, mostly because there really isn't much I can ...

Hey, French Girl XD Welcome to YWS! Like the others, I'm all agog to find a real live French person on YWS, lol. I've just started taking French lessons, so ...

*waves* I'm back! Kind of. I never officially left, but. We'll see how it goes :)

Hi personalinsanity, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you! Re: your poem - ...

Hi KaitelynMiller, I can't really add much to what Jasmine Hart has said, except that I agree: the rhyme comes across as quite forced and your rhythm is choppy, so ...

Hi Demeter, I have to agree with Blink - this has potential, but at the moment it feels like a collection of images, held together by a story that's just ...

There you go, Kyllorac - both done! I finally figured out how to subscribe to a thread, so that should help XD

Hi Kyllorac, Here's the review you requested :) First, I have to gush over how much I enjoyed this. Greek mythology (and poetry which alludes to it) makes me very ...

Hi Kyllorac, Here's the review you requested :) To begin with, there are a lot of things I like about this poem. I love "a susurrant thought," "dreams that spiral, ...

Hi xjpalladinix, Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to leave some reviews and get acquainted with the other members; I'm sure they'll be pleased to meet you! Re: your poem, I ...

Wow, okay, I think I've been away for...way too long. Ahem. I'm trying to review more (again) though, so if you post here I'll try to get to it sooner ...