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  • Lounge, The Re: Name Change: From Young Writers Society to WriterFeed

    I have fond memories of this site from when I was a teen, so it will always be YWS to me, but I can understand wanting to appeal to a ...

    Jul 30
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    24 April some days I cannot smile for joy i met joy walking on a wintry evening coming back from the factory she was carrying a basket over one arm ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    23 April 1. love is a thing that grows I want us bittersweet. I want the taste of oranges when we kiss, the boughs of two young trees bent in ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    22 April [continued] 4. dropped stitches This is how you tell the real from the unreal: weaving only works in one and not the other. We must thread and rethread. ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    22 April 1. composition A tone-deaf man at a concert says to his wife I reckon they're taking this too seriously these people look at them sitting in their rows ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    Thanks for the comments guys :) 7 April 07.04 (the other side of the road).doc With apologies to Emily Dickinson.

    Apr 7, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    6 April 06.04 (intertextual).doc What is this, I don't even...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: The Crimson Cardinal

    *flails* I adore This thin-skinned offering . Can I take it home and keep it? *pets*

    Apr 5, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    Thanks for the wonderful comments, all. I am having such FUN with NaPo this year. 5 April 1. tuesday morning, 8 a.m. Wager me this – that I have, by ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Stardust - Bek's NaPo thread 2011

    Aw, too bad. Still! Sappho! TBH it's been a while so I don't remember the translators I read; because I am lazy I probably just googled XD Sappho's Leap is ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: The Crimson Cardinal

    Everything takes two steps longer when you forget about speed, the break between her thighs and plastic, the turn of her head to the side, the breakdown of language into ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: striking too short at Greeks

    4 April 1. they say justice is blind The law speaks in whispers. We sit, rows deep, and listen to the rustling of that ancient voice an old man bent ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Stardust - Bek's NaPo thread 2011

    Sappho! *flail* Have you read Sappho's Leap , by Erica Jong? It's what got me hooked on her poetry. Are you actually translating some of the original text? Because if ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: drunk with the great starry void -- jack's napowrimo thread

    I love #3. Particularly that last stanza; it's a wonderfully effective conclusion. :smt023

    Apr 4, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: not even the rain

    Not so sure about these lines: how many lions must have lain behind the mirage of your eyes but I absolutely adore: ...how you could smile without showing fangs... [...] ...

    Apr 4, 2011


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