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*Review* Thank you. You're very helpful! I've edited this part now, but there is still not much description of the house, though. xD

*Review* -Knightley Aww. Thank you so much! Actually, I didn't translate the whole thing. I wrote it in English. But some of the sentences are kind of translated, but they're ...

*Review* Good job! Thanks. Well, this is just the prologue. The dialogue won't come until the first chapter. xD

*Review* Overall I like this prologue quite a bit. I think it is much better than the original. Yay! :) Thanks again . I like this better, too. I'll try ...

This story was very cute. : ) *Likes*

*Review* Good luck with the story and just tell me if you need any help! Demeter x Thanks, Dem. Well, I did write this in Norwegian at first. But I ...

*Review* -Knightley Thank you. Then I'll try to make this prologue a little more exciting and when I'm finished I'll let you know. : )

I really liked this prologue. I'm looking forward to read more of your story : )

Thank you, guys. This is really helpful. Before I start writing on the story, maybe I should rewrite this prologue first? And then submit it.. : )

*Review* Over all I really liked it. You should definitely continue the story. I'm curious to see who the main character is. Thank you. Well, I see now that I've ...

I will not correct your grammar. I'm not good at that. But I think what you have written is good, and I look forward to read the first chapter. The ...

Thanks for your reviews : ) This is really helpful.

Well, thanks. I didn't plan this script, though. I just wrote it down when I was bored.. But I'll write a story and make it longer, I think : )

Thanks for the review, Nephthys. Well, maybe I could make this into a story instead? That might be a better idea. I think I'll do that. Maybe I'll write another ...

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