bsbfan19

Thats a really good poem so much emotion, you can really feel what this guy is going through. And the part where he wakes up to find that the world ...

I love the way you talk to anyone, Do you have to talk to her I love the way you love animals, you know I'm allergic to fur I love ...

Good writing skill you got there and i like the title though when i clicked on it i didnt expact it to be this, site in the early 90s. Your ...

I like the title choice on this short and simple, now the story however is okay you could have mad it a little longer and more details into it. I ...

Bet you guys don't know who my Avatar is?! I'll give you a hint there names are Howie, Brain, A.j and Nick and there was someone that used to be ...

The color choice you chose for #3 is good blue and black blend well togather. The colors for #4 which i say is my favorate so far is really good, ...

I think your poem is really good. I liked the part ta the end where he disappears and it makes you wonder why he left and where, alll in all ...

This is good. You have good writing skills, but needs work like what the last post said the words are off balance and the syllables are kind of off but ...

Nice poem,And the title is very catchy made me want to read it. Keep up the good work and keep on writing

Looks good so far but it needs work and i mean alote

I saw the ghost i know its true I know you doubt me like you do But it stood there as clear as you Big and bold and scary A ...

i liked how you told the story and how it became to be but to tell you the truth it didnt look like you put any time into it. what ...

I love how she acts all crazy and he was just all relaxed and didn't show his scared side it was a pretty good poem and I love how the ...

"jock where are you, jock?"

that was informative cha