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This is really good best I'v seen so far! :) And thanks for the review I'll make sure to change the stuff u'd mentioned, keep on writting I'd love to ...

I know the date didn't go that great Collecting you I was an hour late And while I was waiting in your flat I knocked over your plant and sat ...

Oh my god! Is the baby evil or something? That was a great read very differant from the ones I've read befor :) And l loved the ending to the ...

I was wondering if your gonna work on chapter two? Its kinda good and would like to see where this goes! :)

Through the days and through the nights, she dreams of him, her valentine. Her heart beats once, her heart beats twice, her heart will break when she doesnt see him ...

Oh my god your sister did this!! Its really good at 12 years old, she should make an account and join us!! She already has the talent and everything and ...

This is actually really good. I didnt think it was gonna be about a werewolf, I like how you changed it up and mad it a differant kind of werewolf ...

Thats a really good lyrical poem the song flowed easly togather. Awesome job!! :)

Emptiness is inside, blankness is outside. My heart is in my head, my head is in my heart. Words are silent, Emotions take charge. My anger portrayed, my feelings hidden ...

I like to eat pizza that's three days old, Dried up, crusty with a thin layer of mold Just the way I like it. When I use the bathroom I ...

Tell me how you feel, Tell me if what we had was ever real. Because now, you're not what you were. Everything we used to have is just a blur. ...

You are more than my love, you were my very best friendThe one who we swore that we would stick through it till the end You had it all, my ...

I smother it and dim the light which you display so proudly. Yet despite my dark you declare your love for me so very loudly. My tears of rain are ...

The title dosn't really fit the picture it's kind confusing but the picture itself is pretty good i like the color choice you added and that red blanket wraped around ...

This poem is actually really good!! so much emotion behind those words. Wisperer is right if you change it to what he posted for you it would make it way ...