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I LOVE it!! :lol Its the best and I love how her thoughts talk to her saying that you cant fix him and that its to late but she ends ...

This poem is good and its funny how the characture keeps coming back like a drug with out his fix. :) I enjoyed this poem, looking forward to more of ...

Lol I like this poem. Another poem Another review Another like Another post :) Keep it up! Love your work.

Like the post above me said some of it don't make sence. But the poem itself is good you just need to proof read it again and try not to ...

Wow this is good, friends do end up being jealouse of each other weather its about looks, what they wear or what house they live in, but in the end ...

Wow thats an amazing poem. You really know how to catch emotion and put it into details :) good job, and keep up the good work!

This is funny. I like how you wrote that you were gonna write a poem on YWS and ended it with this poem about boredom :) keep it up and ...

This is interesting, some parts I dont get but thats the part about poems, it doesn't have to make sence great job. :)

So I was posting on your wall and read that you wrote a poem called "love" and thought I'd check it out, and now here I am and I really ...

My eyes gaze down at your body. Broken, battered and crumbled. I look down at my own hands. Bruised, bloodied and sore. Haven't I been good to you? So loving ...

Summer night were always muggy and hot. I never quite get enough to drink and along with my sister, found myself sitting on the front porch step. Another droplet of ...

Awesome story!! :) You just made a small typo or er um mistake "whats up?" He said, walking toward me

this is...... good!! l love the way you use words and form it to make the human mind think of something else, awesome job, love to see more!! :)

Wow this is good, l love the last paragraph its a nice way to end it. Keep on writing and welcome to YWS!!

Cling to insanity! Grab a hold of it and never let go As if it depended on your life, watch as your old life shattered! crumbles! Dissipates! And implodes in ...