bsbfan19
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Wow, I really like this poem. Nice and short.
Dec 28, 2011
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I dont get this poem, Lol do you mind filling me in? Thanks.
Dec 25, 2011
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Hmmmm, its been awhile since i did this........ so your like my first to review. Lol ok so let me start by saying that this poem you have written is ...
Dec 25, 2011
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The clouds above hovers, all dark and gray The black hooded figure is on his way You get on your knees and prey You know that you will soon see ...
Jul 21, 2011
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Any time, anywhere, any place you could be anywhere today. Maybe I would regonize you in a crowded street, maybe you'll take me by suprise. Will you be the one ...
Jul 16, 2011
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Hello and welcome to YWS were always looking to meet new ppl though this site may get kind of addicting and what not lol but seriously it really is a ...
Jun 30, 2011
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Hi, and welcome to YWS your gonna love it here and it may or may not get addicting lol. Anyways hope you enjoy this site where your free to write ...
Jun 30, 2011
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This story is amazing!! And sad but thats the best part because things like that really happen. I loved the ending how she kills the baby then herself truely amazing!! ...
Jun 18, 2011
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Hey Meeks lol Im actually new around here barely a month on here and having lots of fun :) Anyways welcome back!!!
Jun 17, 2011
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Hey Nisa and welcome to YWS and no you can't cuss on here or write about sex unless you rate it on the 18+ then your good. Other then that ...
Jun 17, 2011
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Hey Halah welcome to YWS!! This place is awesome and kind of addicting lol. But seriously you are in good hands alote of people comment on works and end up ...
Jun 17, 2011
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Hey Midnight welcome to this site your gonna love it! :) Im new my self and I'v been posting alote of poetry stuff and had alote of good reviews that ...
Jun 17, 2011
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Lol its great to have you here ladyinpurple you'll love this site! :) I also love to write mostly poetry stuff and at times short stories, I also wrote a ...
Jun 17, 2011
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Hey brie! :) I love writing and I mostly do it for fun but dont take the reviews you get from other people on your work, there actually trying to ...
Jun 17, 2011
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This poem is good you can feel the emotion behind it. :) I like the last stanza but you forgot to capitilize the "I" in "would show you how much ...
Jun 17, 2011