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Re: Just Too Much
I think about you, Through and through But you have her, And a lot to offer You're such a flirt But it won't hurt Me, in the long run For ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: The camera on the bus goes snap, snap, snap...
Okie, dokie! The first picture is pretty, but there is a glare in it, and you can see the border around the bus window... In the second picture, the colors ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Well, lets see! Picture Number One, I think you should have used for vibrant colors for the lion. Picture Number Two, I believe this is a perfect picture of Ariel. ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Unnamed
Wow... I really loved your poem! But I don't get one part. "The character's unsound," What does that exactly mean? Other than that, this poem is really lovely. :)
Jun 27, 2009 -
Re: The Greatest Feeling
The Greatest Feeling I'm tingling inside Whenever you are around I'm falling so hard I almost hit the ground Then you catch me; I can't fly But then I say: ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: what I left behind
ohh wow... your poem was really.... emotional. I think I'm on the verge of crying. This poem really shows how someone can be happy, but then it could all bedestroyed ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: True Love
Okay, to start with, I loved it. (: I don't know how, but it seems you modernized classic poetry. Okay, but '4' really just needs to be changes to 'Four' ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Figment
wow. i love it, really. i would love to know where this goes.
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising-Prologue
hey, check out mine. [: I bet it's not as good as yours.
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Midnight
Umm, I don't know how good it is, but i wanted to try this. :shock: p.s. The actual book part needs to be downloaded, it's my stupid computer.
Nov 1, 2008
