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Re: Eleanor Kept Walking
wow, this was a really interesting story!! a very unique idea that i haven't seen before. plus, your use of sensory details combined with your vocabulary is great! i don't ...
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Re: Highway of Darkness
hi! i'm in a bit of a rush to be somewhere, but i'd like to leave my thoughts on this piece before i go :) you've done a great job ...
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Re: Wakefield Oh!
hi there! brooke/BLink here :] this is really good-- you've got a great style! the sentences flow well and the language is engrossing. good use of "show don't tell." and ...
Sep 19, 2023 - Re: A Quiet World Sep 18, 2023
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Re: "And You Didn't Hear It From Me"
hi there! this is my first review/comment/post/anything on this site, but i've reviewed for a quite a few other authors elsewhere, so i think i trust myself to give you ...
Sep 18, 2023
