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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: Eleanor Kept Walking

    wow, this was a really interesting story!! a very unique idea that i haven't seen before. plus, your use of sensory details combined with your vocabulary is great! i don't ...

    Sep 30, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Highway of Darkness

    hi! i'm in a bit of a rush to be somewhere, but i'd like to leave my thoughts on this piece before i go :) you've done a great job ...

    Sep 21, 2023

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Wakefield Oh!

    hi there! brooke/BLink here :] this is really good-- you've got a great style! the sentences flow well and the language is engrossing. good use of "show don't tell." and ...

    Sep 19, 2023

  • Short Story » General, Narrative
    Re: A Quiet World

    Sep 18, 2023

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: "And You Didn't Hear It From Me"

    hi there! this is my first review/comment/post/anything on this site, but i've reviewed for a quite a few other authors elsewhere, so i think i trust myself to give you ...

    Sep 18, 2023


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